Your Pink Floyd reference caught my eye. This tone reminds me a bit of The Dark Side of the Moon. However, it was just bit too short as I'm sure you're obviously well aware. Could have used some guitar over the progression, which by the way, is quite nice. Even a synth like you did in Breeze would have fit nicely here as you could gradually add layers throughout this piece.
I should also note that the way you have mixed your drums was a great choice!